Friday, February 5, 2021

When really bad things happen to your characters 😭(Updated)

It can't always be smooth sailing for characters. There are times when the water is a little rougher than readers can handle. But does that mean writers should avoid uncomfortable topics?

If you're familiar with my writing, you already know that I hardly write about princesses and unicorns. It's not unusual for me to touch on some uncomfortable topics. Not to suggest there haven't been some that gave me a moment of pause, but in the end, I had to follow the story, and more importantly, follow the character and their journey.

Not to say that it's easy. 

It's also possible that your readers may complain about where the story sometimes goes, especially when things get dark. The truth is that for many people, reality gets pretty dark sometimes and for a group of characters to avoid this is simply unrealistic, especially when involved in a long-running series.

In the end, you have to follow the story wherever it takes you. I think a character that experiences some extreme highs and lows, creates compassion from the reader while giving characters more dimension. We connect more with people (in both reality and fiction) if we see they've been through some soul-searching moments in their lives because we relate to it ourselves. 




Thursday, January 28, 2021

How did Jorge Hernandez join this series? ☠️ (Updated)

It might surprise people to learn that Jorge Hernandez wasn't always part of the Hernandez series. When I wrote the book We're All Animals (book 1), I hadn't planned a series, but merely a second book to finish the story of Chase Jacobs. However, when Jorge came along in Always be a Wolf (book 2), it was clear that I was only starting to tell his story. 

Before Chase met Jorge, Diego told him that the Mexican was a 'silent investor' in their company. Up until this point, Chase had some suspicions that something sinister was taking place behind the scenes. However, being so young and inexperienced, he hadn't pinpointed the clues that he was working for criminals. 

I introduced Jorge to my readers as charming, handsome (with 'movie star looks'), and very charismatic. The first impression was that he was likable, not the intimidating mob boss that we're used to seeing on television, in movies, and in books. I purposely demonstrated that he was very friendly to lure Chase in and make him feel comfortable. If this were in a fairy tale, Jorge would've been the big, bad wolf dressed up like grandma because this was how he played the game. He was a sophisticated businessman dressed in expensive suits and spoke in a polite, dignified manner. Therefore, few would think he was a bloodthirsty criminal.

There was just something about Jorge Hernandez that compelled me to continue writing. Now, ten books into the series, I can't seem to stop. 







Friday, January 22, 2021

The first paragraph of We're All Criminals ☠️(Updated)

The first paragraph of a book should be inviting and yet give the reader a sense of the theme ahead. It should be catchy and provoke thought. Most of all, it should invite the reader to keep reading. 

If I pick up a book and find myself confused, bored, or talked down to in the first paragraph, it is unlikely I will continuing reading. I find it very annoying when authors demonstrate themselves as writing elitists in the first paragraph, forgetting that they are trying to impress the average reader, not their university professor. Does that mean that everyday readers want books dumbed down? Of course not. However, they also want a comfortable read that is smooth and welcoming. 

As an example, this is the first paragraph of my book, We're All Criminals. 

Freedom is the trademark of humanity. To those in a prison cell, confined to a hospital bed, or trapped in their figurative coffin, there is nothing more beautiful than freedom. We’re all animals, and as such, it’s in our nature to claw our way out of any trap we feel locked in because the light of freedom shines much brighter after it has been lost. We will fight for it. We will beg for it, and if we have to, we will kill for it.

No one appreciated freedom more than Jorge Hernandez. As a former Mexican cartel leader, he had managed to escape both death and prison, something he recognized as a rarity for his kind. Now in his 40s, he was blessed with a beautiful family and lived in Canada. As the CEO of Our House of Pot, Jorge had the monopoly in the legalized marijuana industry. To the outside world, he was a charismatic Mexican-Canadian businessman who is relatable and brought jobs to communities throughout the country. But to those who knew him, Jorge Hernandez was one of the most dangerous men in the world and did whatever he needed to get what he wanted.





Friday, January 8, 2021

Why character traits matter 🧐(Updated)

Just like all of us, characters often have traits we associate with them. It could be a physical object like always holding a cup of coffee or a pack of cigarettes. It also could be a dialogue pattern or a commonly used expression. For example, in my series, one character is known for constantly stating that there's more than one way to skin a cat. It could also be a physical trait like someone who walks with a skip or is bowlegged. 

It doesn't matter if characters are major or minor or only around for a short time; there should be distinct traits because this makes them seem more 3-dimensional. The last thing you want is a flat character because this makes them more difficult for the reader to connect with them. And if a reader can't connect with the specific character then they are less likely to care. And if they don't care about the characters, they probably won't likely care about the book either.

If you want an example of character traits, I'd suggest you watch your favorite show and observe the actors and see what specific things you associate with them. Do they have unusual speech patterns? Do they dress uniquely? Do they have a hairstyle that stands out? Do they have lime trees throughout their house? Do they occasionally jump from English to Spanish? Do they carry a baseball bat in their trunk? You know, the usual stuff. 

Remember, most character traits come out as you're writing so don't overthink it. They'll show you as you develop them. 



Saturday, January 2, 2021

Why I'm an author with a social conscience 🌎(Updated)

For the most part, I'm willing to bet that most fiction authors have a social conscience. I say that because I see it in their writing. We see it on television. When you consider a classic television episode still very much alive in people's memory, it's perhaps because it brought up a social issue that was a particular concern during that time. 

Even when I published my first book and had no idea what I was doing, I still needed to bring up social issues that were important to me. Of course, I was still getting my feet wet back then, so it's mild compared to the topics I bring up in my more recent books, especially the Hernandez series. These days my books feature issues like racism, indigenous issues, poverty, homelessness, Big Pharma, mental health issues, bullying, political corruption, police misconduct, white supremacy, environmental concerns...and that's just off the top of my head. I'm sure there are other social issues I have missed. 

Not to say that I have an entire book about any of these topics. It could be as simple as a subject touched on in a book like environmental issues, or it could be something like racism, which comes up in most of this series. 

I like to bring up these subjects within the storyline because it puts a face on a topic. Readers see through the character's eyes, getting a peek into their world, which helps create compassion or, at the very least, some understanding of their point of view. 

Our world is much smaller than we think, and as people, we have more in common than our egos sometimes want us to believe. 




Thursday, December 31, 2020

My Year in Review - 2020, me and Jorge Hernandez ☠️

Good-bye (and good riddance!) to 2020!! 👋🏼


Let's not talk about that terrible C word....you know the one 🙄

So, I'm here to give you a rundown of my year in review - the books, the blogs, the media, and the videos!

The Books

Let's start with the TWO books that I published this year. Both are part of the popular Hernandez series ☠️

She Was His Angel - May 2020
We're All Criminals - November 2020

The Media

The Buzz - July 2020

Blogs and Videos

January 2020

Songs that inspired The Devil and His Legacy
     Blog
     Video


Let's talk about Maria Hernandez 
     Blog
     Video


Be your own media
     Blog
     Video


When characters are out of their element
     Blog
     Video


February 2020

Bookmark giveaway! 🤩
     Video
     Blog

What resources do you use to research your books? 🧐

     Video
     Blog

Why do (my) criminals always win? 😏

     Video
     Blog

Why I will never look at some songs the same way again 😱

     Video
     Blog

March 2020

Writing Blocks and Road Blocks 🚧

     Video
     Blog

The Evolution of Jorge Hernandez ☠️
     Video
     Blog

April 2020

Locked up at home and thinking about writing a book? Here are some videos that might help you out:

Does everyone have a creative side? 

Shout you be a writer? 

Writing blocks and roadblocks

What resources do you use to research?

Dialogue that pops!

Do writers need high word counts?

Should characters be based on people you know?

What is a 3-dimensional character and why do you need them


May 2020

Why I write books at the same pace as a tv show 🙀🔪📺

     Blog
     Video 
 

Are you more of a Chase Jacobs or Jorge Hernandez? 😇😈

       Blog
       Video


June 2020

Do we really need genres anymore?

Video     Blog
 

Why I have 10 different lives 🤪

Video     Blog
 

Why I don't give away free books anymore 🧐

Video     Blog
 

Let's talk about my YouTube channel 📺

Video.    Blog

July 2020

How do you keep track of everything?? 🤔

     Video
     Blog
 

She Was His Angel ☠️

     Video
     Blog
 

Why I won't be putting THIS in my next book 🙀🦠

     Video
     Blog

August 2020

The first paragraph of She Was His Angel ☠️

     Video
     Blog

Book themes that matter 😌

     Video
     Blog 

Why we love the softer side of a gangster character 💀

     Video
     Blog

Why do I choose to be an indie author? 🤩

     Video
     Blog

Why my characters color outside of the lines 🎨

     Video
     Blog

September 2020

Should you put touchy subjects in your books? 😬

     Youtube
     Blogger
 

Stay in touch with your characters ☎️

     YouTube
     Blogger
 

How characters affect each other 🤝

     YouTube
     Blogger


October 2020

Let's talk about Marco Rodel Cruz - the hacker 🖥

     Video
     Blog 
 

What is the Hernandez series about? ☠️

     Video
     Blog

November 2020

The future of my Youtube channel 📺

     Video
     Blog

Does it ring true? 🔕

     Video
     Blog

We're All Criminals - the 9th book in the Hernandez series! ☠️

     Video
     Blog

December 2020

My goals with the Hernandez series
 ☠️
 
     Video
     Blog 

Jorge Hernandez vs. the Greek God ☠️

     Video
     Blog

Do I have to read the entire Hernandez series to follow the latest book? 🧐

     Video
     Blog


😱Wow....no wonder I'm exhausted. 

Happy New Year! Thanks for the support.

Mima 🌼





Monday, December 21, 2020

Do I have to read the entire Hernandez series to follow the latest book? 🧐(Updated)

No. 

Well, that was a short article.

Maybe I should elaborate.

A book should be strong enough to stand on its own. Sure, there should be some details explained in a general manner to give the reader some idea of the most relevant information. Of course, this is without spoiling the plot or digging too much into the past. One clean swoop should take care of everything the reader needs to know.

For example, if you wrote a book with a complicated plotline and followed it up with the sequel, you wouldn't give the reader every detail from that previous book but a vague and summarized explanation that keeps the reader on a need-to-know basis only. 

For example, in my Hernandez series, I often refer to Jorge Hernandez's shady past but never get into his complicated history. I let you know that he is brutal, dangerous and no one gets in his way. However, I don't go into an explanation of the crimes he committed. Nor do I discuss the revenge, the murders, the corruption, nor do I talk about the threats, manipulation, and ...I think you get the idea. 

In essence, he's crazy, he's dangerous, and you don't want to get on Jorge's bad side. 

In the end, there should be enough information about the previous books in the series to create intrigue. After all, if they fall in love with the book in their hands, chances are they'll want to snatch up the ones that precede it.